Leave the place where you are not free
Join a world where you can see
Not only the bad but also the good
You must believe in order to leave
This cave that confines your thoughts
Take a chance to understand
You can escape the shackles
There is a way out
Look beyond the dark
You will see light
Follow it to see a new reality
Don't hesitate now is your chance
A world of wonders awaits
You can escape and uncover the truth
Oh I like your sonnet, it's very lively and full of imagery. Good job!
ReplyDeleteAlso, I like your blog theme! What is your strategy for the vocabulary final? mkagawarhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com
First of all I really like your background and this sonnet is so good and full of hope! I enjoyed the read. My question to you is do you agree with Plato when he says that the universe is good and so is everyone in it? why? why not? http://emarquezrhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteYour sonnet definitely fits the definition of a sonnet. I really liked yours, especially the last two lines
ReplyDeleteNice sonnet Carl! Very creative.
ReplyDeleteI enjoy the perspective in how this was written. It had hope in it instead of the usual doom and gloom of these sonnets. nice work!
ReplyDeleteCool sonnet, it definitely captures some of the imagery that Plato used. I loved how it was written, and was awesome at reflecting the urgency of Plato's warnings.
ReplyDeleteI love the inspirational tone of your sonnet. Great work!
ReplyDeleteIn addition, the background of your blog is amazing. I love the color that seems like a cross between a sunset and one of those Tropical Skittles! It's so beautiful! Check out my blog here.
Your sonnet is very good!
ReplyDeleteI love your blog the background is very calm and the font is pretty. How do you plan to study for the vocab final? check out my blog here http://rnolanrhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/
Nice sonnet Caroline! I like the hopeful tone! Your blog is really nice as well! The simpleness is really effective for a literature blog! Do you think reading these sonnets deepened your understanding of Allegory of the Cave? Check out my blog !
ReplyDeleteYour sonnet reminds me of the Laughing Heart Poem, I love it. Your blog is so nice and pretty to look at. It gives off a relaxing vibe.
ReplyDeleteI was about to mention the The Laughing Heart, but looks like Whitney beat me to it! :P I really like the theme of your poem, but I'm not sure if it fits the definition of a sonnet because I can't see a rhyme scheme. I took some notes on the different kinds of rhyme schemes on my blog, if you're interested :)
ReplyDeleteMy question for you is, how are you going to choose what to do for your final presentation?
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