Leisure is
leisure but George Eliot seems to insist that it’s gone. Eliot insists that “Old Leisure” was better
than his time (1859). It was a simple time. Eliot uses irony, personification,
and contrast to point out the differences between old leisure and modern
leisure. To Eliot “even idleness is
eager now-eager for amusement”. Eliot portrays
old leisure as calm.
George Eliot portrays old leisure as
calm and relaxing. He imagines it as an elder, reading newspapers, enjoys only
the quiet. Eliot describes it as quiet and seems to enjoy that more than modern
leisure. Eliot uses personification to fully grasp the idea of old leisure. Modern
leisure is opposite to most and don’t really enjoy what Eliot has to say about
the idea of old leisure.
Eliot uses contrast to portray
modern leisure. It is clear that Eliot does not like Modern leisure as opposed
to old leisure. Most enjoy going out and having company, instead of sitting
alone in the quiet. Some people still enjoy old leisure but not as much as
modern leisure. Eliot emphasizes the importance of old leisure and her dislikes
toward modern leisure.
Eliot expresses his dislikes toward
modern leisure because it doesn’t give you the meaning of leisure anymore. Modern
leisure just strips away the entire meaning of leisure and it seems to disappoint
Eliot. Eliot feels more people shouldn’t “follow the crowd” and enjoy a leisure
you might not. If you enjoy old leisure that’s what you enjoy. Modern leisure
is more upbeat while old leisure is calm and serene.
In conclusion, George Eliot
expresses his dislikes toward modern leisure. He expresses more likeness toward
old leisure. Eliot seems to think that a calm and serene environment is what is
really needed. Others may disagree but
it seemed to be that old leisure to Eliot is the only leisure there should
be. Eliot uses personification, irony,
and contrast to portray his view on old leisure.
The grade that I would give your essay would be a 5. My reasoning for this is that there was not a lot of evidence that supported your statements and there a lot of repetitiveness. I felt that you could have went into more detail in each body paragraph. Also, try not to use the same word to start off each sentence as you started numerous sentences with "Eliot".
ReplyDelete^there was a lot of repetitiveness.
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