What I Meant to Say Was

I really rushed my essay during the midterm. I was worried I didn't have a lot of time so I was switching from vocabulary to the essay. I was not really confident on my essay. Also I was worried I did not have enough vocabulary words either. My thesis was not as strong as it could have been and I really need to improve on that part of my writing. I think that I should do a pre write next time as well. I think my thesis was pretty good it just needed a little more information than I gave.